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Posted on June 3, 2009 at 12:59 PM.
I know a few people read the original copy - but would anyone be willing to read, or re-read, the revised version of a story of mine?

It's 17 pages, most of it is double spaced, but some of it is only 1.5's heavy on the dialogue so it should be an easy read. It's pretty different from the original version as I re-wrote every piece of dialogue and re-wrote most of the "action" scenes to differentiate them from each other.

So, basically, if anyone is bored and wants to read it just let me know. I could use some feedback.
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