poll, do I have mad limerick skillz?

SnDvls · 06-05-2006, 03:56 PM

Number 11 is a task I must do
Number 13 is performed here too
A poll and no trout?
What’s that all about?
I hope this limerick will do

cartman · 06-05-2006, 03:57 PM

You have revealed your quest to others! I call for disqualification!

SnDvls · 06-05-2006, 03:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cartman

You have revealed your quest to others! I call for disqualification!

the original public game says there are 20 items??? what did I do?

SnDvls · 06-05-2006, 04:33 PM

dola -

here's a revised one

Number 11 is a task I must do
Number 13 is performed here too
I didn't say which is which
there's no need to bitch
so what will RA do?

NoMyths · 06-05-2006, 04:41 PM

*looks on disapprovingly*

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 04:44 PM

Quote:

Number 11 is a task I must do
Number 13 is performed here too
A poll and no trout?
What’s that all about?
I hope this limerick will do

I admit I don't get this one bit
it's devoid of any humor or wit
in limerick terms
your offering confirms
your talent is truly for shit.

Sorry, but limericks are my favorite form of poetry and I was actually known as the limking on mIRC for a while.

I do limericks quickly and quite impromptu and don't edit them. I really don't mean to criticize your entry and encourage anyone to practice the artform as I love reading them as much as creating them but when the rhyme fits, I must submit.

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 04:45 PM

I just voted that I want more btw.

wade moore · 06-05-2006, 04:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cartman

You have revealed your quest to others! I call for disqualification!

"

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 04:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by wade moore

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I must really admit I abhor
the comment just made by wade moore
I've can't recall being this incenced
at least not quite since
the actions of zha zha gabor.

SnDvls · 06-05-2006, 04:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NoMyths

*looks on disapprovingly*

Does that mean you don't like it?

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 04:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SnDvls

Does that mean you don't like it?

I'd say that it's really quite clear
your limerick did not quite endear
I wouldn't take it wrong wrong
and I'd say before long
you might produce an entry he'd cheer.

SnDvls · 06-05-2006, 04:51 PM

It really was my first time
At doing a silly rhyme
My effort not doubt
Gives me some sort of clout
Unless I was paid with your dime.

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 04:52 PM

No it wasn't doubly wrong.

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 04:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SnDvls

It really was my first time
At doing a silly rhyme
My effort not doubt
Gives me some sort of clout
Unless I was paid with your dime.

For a first time entry not bad
worse offerings are sure to be had
as for having your doubts
you should remember the trouts
and not be dismayed by the cad.

SnDvls · 06-05-2006, 04:57 PM

What was meant as a simple post
Has turned into quite the roast
“Poor little Sn”
“Axxon’s out rhymes’ you for fun”
“And soon you’ll just be toast”

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 05:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SnDvls

What was meant as a simple post
Has turned into quite the roast
“Poor little Sn”
“Axxon’s out rhymes’ you for fun”
“And soon you’ll just be toast”

Axx doesn't just rhyme to roast
nor does he just rhyme to boast
he humbly replies
"I encourage your tries
to celebrate the art form I toast."

BYU 14 · 06-05-2006, 05:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Axxon

Axx doesn't just rhyme to roast
nor does he just rhyme to boast
he humbly replies
"I encourage your tries
to celebrate the art form I toast."

In Sun writing limericks he tried,
but the rhymes in his head came out fried.
it's damn hot here,
and that's why I fear,
You should not make these up while outside.

My Limerick in honor of the cool 112 degree temps SnDvls and I are sharing right now.

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 05:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BYU 14

In Sun writing limericks he tried,
but the rhymes in his head came out fried.
it's damn hot here,
and that's why I fear,
You should not make these up while outside.

My Limerick in honor of the cool 112 degree temps SnDvls and I are sharing right now.

To defend his rhyme you honestly tried
but your effort at defense aside
In Phoenix I dwell
and it's hotter than hell
but my rhyming is hitting it's stride.

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 05:37 PM

Hmm, AZ FOFC get together maybe??

Eaglesfan27 · 06-05-2006, 05:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cartman

You have revealed your quest to others! I call for disqualification!

"

Axxon · 06-05-2006, 05:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eaglesfan27

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Again though it seems quite absurd
another ditto has occured
I must simply be terse
but I am quite adverse
to when an attempt at communication is deterred.

Raven Hawk · 06-05-2006, 09:51 PM

I think that I might fit the bill
to be honest it would be a thrill
though I'm often told
that my luck won't hold
long enough to get the thread kill

AZSpeechCoach · 06-05-2006, 11:55 PM

The poor limerick is
A sucky type of poem
Not like the haiku

Groundhog · 06-06-2006, 12:01 AM

Unfortunately
Your haiku was not in the
Five seven five count.

AZSpeechCoach · 06-06-2006, 12:07 AM

I suppose it depends if you count limerick as 2 or 3 syllables. I count it as 2 and therefore it works.

wade moore · 06-06-2006, 12:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AZSpeechCoach

I suppose it depends if you count limerick as 2 or 3 syllables. I count it as 2 and therefore it works.

"limrick"?

Hah.

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06-05-2006, 03:57 PM	#2
cartman Death Herald Join Date: Nov 2000 Location: Le stelle la notte sono grandi e luminose nel cuore profondo del Texas	You have revealed your quest to others! I call for disqualification! __________________ Thinkin' of a master plan 'Cuz ain't nuthin' but sweat inside my hand So I dig into my pocket, all my money is spent So I dig deeper but still comin' up with lint

06-05-2006, 04:45 PM	#7
Axxon Pro Starter Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Phoenix, AZ	I just voted that I want more btw. __________________ There are no houris, alas, in our heaven.

06-05-2006, 04:52 PM	#13
Axxon Pro Starter Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Phoenix, AZ	No it wasn't doubly wrong. __________________ There are no houris, alas, in our heaven.

06-05-2006, 05:37 PM	#19
Axxon Pro Starter Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Phoenix, AZ	Hmm, AZ FOFC get together maybe?? __________________ There are no houris, alas, in our heaven.

06-05-2006, 04:33 PM	#4
SnDvls Pro Starter Join Date: Jul 2001	dola - here's a revised one Number 11 is a task I must do Number 13 is performed here too I didn't say which is which there's no need to bitch so what will RA do?

06-05-2006, 04:41 PM	#5
NoMyths Poet in Residence Join Date: Oct 2000 Location: Charleston, SC	looks on disapprovingly

06-05-2006, 04:51 PM	#12
SnDvls Pro Starter Join Date: Jul 2001	It really was my first time At doing a silly rhyme My effort not doubt Gives me some sort of clout Unless I was paid with your dime.

06-05-2006, 04:57 PM	#15
SnDvls Pro Starter Join Date: Jul 2001	What was meant as a simple post Has turned into quite the roast “Poor little Sn” “Axxon’s out rhymes’ you for fun” “And soon you’ll just be toast”

06-05-2006, 09:51 PM	#22
Raven Hawk College Starter Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Thunderdome	I think that I might fit the bill to be honest it would be a thrill though I'm often told that my luck won't hold long enough to get the thread kill __________________ Owner of The Shreveport Pride in The CFL

06-05-2006, 11:55 PM	#23
AZSpeechCoach College Prospect Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Phoenix	The poor limerick is A sucky type of poem Not like the haiku __________________ The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they'll be when you kill them! Visit Stewart the Wonderbear and his amazing travels http://wonderbeartravel.blogspot.com

06-06-2006, 12:01 AM	#24
Groundhog Coordinator Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Sydney, Australia	Unfortunately Your haiku was not in the Five seven five count. __________________ Politics, n. Strife of interests masquerading as a contest of principles. --Ambrose Bierce

06-06-2006, 12:07 AM	#25
AZSpeechCoach College Prospect Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Phoenix	I suppose it depends if you count limerick as 2 or 3 syllables. I count it as 2 and therefore it works. __________________ The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they'll be when you kill them! Visit Stewart the Wonderbear and his amazing travels http://wonderbeartravel.blogspot.com

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