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druez
11-27-2003, 08:10 PM
http://www.hoopsology.com/videogamesarticle.php3?ArticleID=25

cincyreds
11-28-2003, 05:43 AM
cool!

TroyF
11-28-2003, 06:02 AM
I don't think I've ever been critical of grammar issues on this board. Maybe once or twice. I don't always have the time to spell check every post I write. I don't even get bothered by the it's/its others do.

Having said that, I think if you are writing a professional review for a website, it might be wise to edit things a little more heavily than you would a post on a message board. The opening line of the review:

We finished up our last episode with Nay Nay loosing in the finals to Florida.

I didn't look for or notice any other errors in the rest of the review. I only skimmed the rest of it though. Seems like a decent game. The reviews from the FOFC group haven't been so good. I doubt I'll have time for it with FOF2004 and CM anyway. This is one I may end up buying a few months down the road if it looks like the necessary improvements have been made.

TroyF

yabanci
11-28-2003, 06:25 AM
I think this guy writes good, informative reviews. It does need to be proofread more carefully though. Make sure you get this one two:

"The leaders screen basically brakes down the league leaders in various different categories."

Noop
11-28-2003, 07:28 AM
Its not that good

Samdari
11-28-2003, 08:29 AM
Yabanci, I am going to assume that your goof was intentional, and thus comic genius.

CraigSca
11-28-2003, 08:37 AM
I think your loosing it, you two.

Ok...it's a stretch :)