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Originally Posted by Alan T
So right now this is our current top choices for each with the grammar and other wording changes:
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Haiku:
Twelve teams with one goal
To win in the bitter cold --
The Colts reign supreme.
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For the Haiku, I think you should change cold to wind or rain. I don't think cold is actually an element word. If the judges stick to the stringent standard as BK hopes they do, that could be a problem.