I just went back and finished rereading this epic over the last few weeks and it was a lot of fun! I edited out some inconsistencies and bad grammar in a few places. Most of the images of the things we owned no longer worked, so I redid a few here and there. I also updated the Grey Death suits that we have with info about the two they are making at this time after their death in Hesperus and reboot inour unit, which also happened in real life with the techs making armor but not with the updated unit in our TOE.
Last edited by Abe Sargent : 06-16-2022 at 09:23 AM.
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