Unrelated to your request for feedback, let me give you a heads up that Don Jaily has decided to take at least a week off from the Tour & go on vacation.
(OOC: I'm leaving for Disney on Saturday, gone til late Friday)
By way of feedback, honestly, I feel pretty much disconnected from my character & have little idea wth is going on. Everything feels very, I dunno, like we're just throwing darts in the dark. Probably just me but I think the "not giving away too much" aspect might be skewed too far toward keeping the players in the dark.
I appreciate the effort, and Lord knows I'm not intending to bust your chops here at all, but that's my honest take.
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Last edited by JonInMiddleGA : 12-06-2017 at 08:55 PM.
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