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Tyrith · 02-06-2007, 01:34 PM

I like that ending much better. Only change might be to take the word "finally" out of the last line to make the tempo work better, but that's pretty good.

02-06-2007, 01:34 PM	#119
Tyrith College Starter Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Houston, TX	I like that ending much better. Only change might be to take the word "finally" out of the last line to make the tempo work better, but that's pretty good.