Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Anxiety
Dear *****:
Thank you for your reply. It is unfortunate that you are unable to consider me as a candidate for the Student Affairs Officer. I believe that you would find me very qualified and I was looking forward to this position. I was hoping that you would be able to hire me and then apply for a work permit on my behalf, but if you are unable to do so, then I understand. Should this situation change, please do not hesitate to contact me as my interest will remain. Thank you again for your consideration.
|
You might want to soften your tone a little. When I first read that, it came across as being demanding and a little threatening. I know that wasn't your intention.