Hey guys, just got done doing a piano demo for the second song I've ever written. I'd appreciate feedback.
Title: Now and Forever
Lyrics-
Twenty three years old, and I aint never been aware
But you know that its just me, who never saw himself,
Things werent made to be, meant for someone else.
Im so afraid, I know Ill never make it here
When Im alone Im only renting in my mind,
Whenever I go out, Im paying for the time,
Could it be Im doomed to see my
My world run out,
Now and forever.
Its pain to see that time only
Confirms all the doubt,
Now and forever.
Twenty three years old, and I aint never been awake,
Dreaming through all my time, never not today
Restless wonders on my mind, how they slip away.
Could it be Im scared to see
My inner light wear out,
Now and forever
Frightened to see in life,
Theres no cure for a drought.
Now and forever.
Title: Now and Forever
Lyrics-
Twenty three years old, and I aint never been aware
But you know that its just me, who never saw himself,
Things werent made to be, meant for someone else.
Im so afraid, I know Ill never make it here
When Im alone Im only renting in my mind,
Whenever I go out, Im paying for the time,
Could it be Im doomed to see my
My world run out,
Now and forever.
Its pain to see that time only
Confirms all the doubt,
Now and forever.
Twenty three years old, and I aint never been awake,
Dreaming through all my time, never not today
Restless wonders on my mind, how they slip away.
Could it be Im scared to see
My inner light wear out,
Now and forever
Frightened to see in life,
Theres no cure for a drought.
Now and forever.