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Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
Good job. I like this because you played for the Kamloops Blazers, which is my hometown. But, when you moved to Vancouver, you joined the Giants. You can't just join the Giants, the Blazers would have had to trade you, or you'd have to still play for the Blazers if they didn't.
But, either way, I like this. I'm following.
Edit: Hope you get drafted by the Nucks!Last edited by canucksfan33; 06-24-2009, 01:49 AM. -
Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
Hey man. nice star. I shall be following.When life gets me down, I get over it!Comment
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Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
The image your trying to get doesn't work, because I was going to use it to show you, and it didn't work.
Nevermind, I think you know how, just that image doesn't work.Last edited by canucksfan33; 06-24-2009, 02:06 AM.Comment
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Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
hey man, you've got a real solid start going on here, but I'd suggest putting some spaces between each topic change, to make it a bit easier on the eyes.
Also, the writing needs to flow more. Instead of saying "Hi, my name is Billy Joel, and I like cows," say, "Billy Joel had always been fond of farm animals, and especially liked cows."
If you're struggling to see what I'm getting at, check out my BAP, or Bhurst's, or even Quickster's.
Good luck, though.Comment
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Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
nice updates ill definatly be following.Comment
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Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
Good start, keep it up!!Comment
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Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
Nice. I like this a lot.
Except I'm pretty sure first year BAP's only get a 1 year deal..
No big deal, Great job with this.Comment
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Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
great job with this, man.
Those last three updates were really good, actually.
I find myself liking them a lot.Comment
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Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
Haha, lol. Sounds like she only wants to date you again because your loaded, and have a nice car.got another phone call; it was from my middle school lover. She said she just moved to Vancouver and wanted to go on a date. With nothing to do I agreed.
Everything went great and we had fun on the date. So fun in fact, we’re going out again. It was a good birthday present. I was now an 18-year-old NHL multi-millionaire, with a hot girlfriend. Things were good.
Nice updates, really enjoying reading this.Comment
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Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP
lol middle school lover?
isn't there like, another term for that? haha.Comment
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