Would you read this?

[Beantown]

Re: Would you read this?

Thanks for the feedback, man.

[aukevin]

Re: Would you read this?

Just letting you know that I read through it this morning. I like Judas a lot, he's the kind of villian that I like to read. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment to find out what happens after the shots. I'm hoping that since this is the Guardian's first night out that things don't go too perfectly but he does something to really get under Judas' skin to build a real nemesis role between both of them. Good stuff.

[jerseyboi2284]

Re: Would you read this?

that is really really good....so far your story is an attention grabber I almost forgot that you said it was just the rough draft version. I'd give it a read when the whole story comes to fruition

[GenoG]

Re: Would you read this?

I like it, keep it up.

[Beantown]

Re: Would you read this?

Just letting you know that I read through it this morning. I like Judas a lot, he's the kind of villian that I like to read. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment to find out what happens after the shots. I'm hoping that since this is the Guardian's first night out that things don't go too perfectly but he does something to really get under Judas' skin to build a real nemesis role between both of them. Good stuff.

Yeah, I usually like to focus on my bad guys in my stories, so I expect Judas to be a really good character. I've never really put a lot of focus on a good guy, so writing the Guardian will be a fun challenge to take. And don't worry - I love bad guys more than good, so there may be quite a few times where the Guardian is lacking.

Plus, remember he's just a normal person who is doing something he learned from comics, movies and cartoons. He's going to have his problems.

that is really really good....so far your story is an attention grabber I almost forgot that you said it was just the rough draft version. I'd give it a read when the whole story comes to fruition

Thanks for the compliments, man.

I like it, keep it up.

Thanks, will do.

[RAZRr1275]

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Nice stuff.

[hardcor2]

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I liked that even more. I like the direction you're taking the characters. This is going to be pretty good when fine tuned and finished.

[Chaos81]

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Read about a third of it and it's not really my thing.

But I wanted to drop in and wish you and your friend good luck.

[Beantown]

Re: Would you read this?

Nice stuff.

Thanks for reading it, man.

I liked that even more. I like the direction you're taking the characters. This is going to be pretty good when fine tuned and finished.

Glad to hear it, man. Thanks for keeping up to date with it. I'll make sure to keep you posted when I post any more updates.

Read about a third of it and it's not really my thing.

But I wanted to drop in and wish you and your friend good luck.

I realize it's not for everyone, but thanks for checking in and for the comments, man.