The Gym (I'm a B!$#h)

[Keviniso]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h9_DEUAkNXE

Video I made...also made this one a while back http://www.operationsports.com/forum...-nba-2k11.html

feedback pls!

EDIT: If you know how to get the video itself in this thread please do it for me. thanks

[daflyboys]

Re: The Gym (I'm a B!$#h)

I don't know..... seemed like 5 minutes to get to a punchline that was already in the title. Maybe it's me or a generational gap thing.

[Keviniso]

Re: The Gym (I'm a B!$#h)

you're right, i tried to add subtle jokes in between. thanks though.

[Scruffychicken]

Re: The Gym (I'm a B!$#h)

I don't know..... seemed like 5 minutes to get to a punchline that was already in the title. Maybe it's me or a generational gap thing.

Kinda what I was thinking too. I didn't dislike it though because it's obvious a lot of effort went into making that.

I just didn't get it.

[Keviniso]

Re: The Gym (I'm a B!$#h)

Cool, I may be appealing to the wrong crowd here, but it's just an exaggeration of how someone might feel uncomfortable in a gym. It was intended to be a comedic scenario.

[daflyboys]

Re: The Gym (I'm a B!$#h)

Then maybe just call it "The Gym" and consider editing it quite a bit. More is not necessarily better. 2 minutes of effective beats 5 minutes of drawn out. Believe me, I know, you do a lot to shoot and edit and cut and re-edit and then you end up with something that seems highly short. But that only seems that way to you. Think about some of the funniest sketches you've seen on youtube or some comedy show you watch..... when it gets drawn out, it gets weak.

[Keviniso]

Re: The Gym (I'm a B!$#h)

ok, i'll shoot for under 3 min on the next one. thanks.