Alright first of all...I didn't say anything regarding the French Revolution. I'm not saying the french revolution isn't worthy of discussing, but if you are looking for higher level analysis of the FR then you are probably wasting your time coming to OS.
I would suggest that you would be better served researching the FR from academic sources rather than arguing with me about it here. I'm an English major and I don't come here asking for opinions of whether or not Gertrude Stein was affected by Picasso and African folk art.
And don't think that I'm calling you stupid, because that was never my intent. There have been many times when I've been assigned something and have been frustrated, and have looked for help. However, I think you are looking for help in the wrong place. Go ask a professor, go read some books, if you must look for help on a message board at least go to one where history is a major topic of discussion. This is a 25 page thesis and I'm sure it is going to count for a large portion of your grade. Any criticism coming from this website is probably not going to be valid and it isn't going to help you.
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