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  • Lintyfresh85
    Where have I been?
    • Jul 2002
    • 17492

    #1

    First ever 'comic' attempt

    Hey guys, I just wanted to post my first ever comic strip today. I've been toying with the idea of drawing some very simple stick figure comics with 'witty' dialogue or ironic situations... Anyways, this is my first one, and I'd love some feedback, positive or negative.

    http://flotn.blogspot.com

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    Originally posted by trobinson97
    Hell, I shot my grandmother, cuz she was old.
  • MassNole
    Banned
    • Mar 2006
    • 18848

    #2
    Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

    LOL, that is good, keep at it.

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    • Adam Dayton
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      • Jan 2008
      • 1835

      #3
      Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

      Is the noose supposed to represent a clothing hanger, and the person represents the "clothibng accessories" that hang from it? If so, that is sort of the pun type of stuff that many comics have and that is tite. If not, I don't want to be mean but can you explain the "joke" to me.

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      • Mo
        SSN
        • May 2003
        • 11425

        #4
        Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

        Originally posted by Adam Dayton
        Is the noose supposed to represent a clothing hanger, and the person represents the "clothibng accessories" that hang from it? If so, that is sort of the pun type of stuff that many comics have and that is tite. If not, I don't want to be mean but can you explain the "joke" to me.
        I think your reading too much into it, it looks like just a game of Hangman, simple but clever.
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        • Lintyfresh85
          Where have I been?
          • Jul 2002
          • 17492

          #5
          Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

          No. I'm just bad at drawing a noose.

          I guess I was just saying everytime you play 'hangman' you are an accessory to the murder of a stickman.
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          Originally posted by trobinson97
          Hell, I shot my grandmother, cuz she was old.

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          • daflyboys
            Banned
            • May 2003
            • 18238

            #6
            Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

            Great concept. Since you're wanting feedback, here's my two cents:

            *keep the image true to the game hangman.... like less is more: no noose, feet, etc. needed. People will get it.

            *maybe either less letters in the phrase or some other phrase like "goodbye cruel world"; "tell my wife I love her"...... something like that.

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            • slickdtc
              Grayscale
              • Aug 2004
              • 17125

              #7
              Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

              Maybe you can even spice it up by listing a category.
              NHL - Philadelphia Flyers
              NFL - Buffalo Bills
              MLB - Cincinnati Reds


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              • Adam Dayton
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                • Jan 2008
                • 1835

                #8
                Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

                Originally posted by Lintyfresh85
                No. I'm just bad at drawing a noose.

                I guess I was just saying everytime you play 'hangman' you are an accessory to the murder of a stickman.
                Oh,I get it now. That is good stuff man I like that alot.

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                • mgoblue
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                  • Jul 2002
                  • 25477

                  #9
                  Re: First ever 'comic' attempt



                  Cyanide & Happiness @ Explosm.net

                  Coincidentally a similar stick figure comic site with a hangman theme...I like where you're going with this though, and stick figure humor just places more emphasis on the joke than the art, which can be cool.
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                  • Lintyfresh85
                    Where have I been?
                    • Jul 2002
                    • 17492

                    #10
                    Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

                    Originally posted by daflyboys
                    Great concept. Since you're wanting feedback, here's my two cents:

                    *keep the image true to the game hangman.... like less is more: no noose, feet, etc. needed. People will get it.

                    *maybe either less letters in the phrase or some other phrase like "goodbye cruel world"; "tell my wife I love her"...... something like that.
                    I redesigned it a bit on your suggestion... what do you think?

                    http://flotn.blogspot.com

                    Member of the Official OS Bills Backers Club

                    Originally posted by trobinson97
                    Hell, I shot my grandmother, cuz she was old.

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                    • mgoblue
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                      • Jul 2002
                      • 25477

                      #11
                      Re: First ever 'comic' attempt



                      You'd probably also like XKCD...similar style, deep joke with limited art
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                      • daflyboys
                        Banned
                        • May 2003
                        • 18238

                        #12
                        Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

                        Originally posted by Lintyfresh85
                        I redesigned it a bit on your suggestion... what do you think?


                        Now that I see it, I don't think the "accessory...." fits because there isn't anyone else around and you'd have to stretch to think it was the person playing the game. So maybe more along the lines of something the guy hanging would say right before.

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                        • JohnnytheSkin
                          All Star
                          • Jul 2003
                          • 5914

                          #13
                          Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

                          Originally posted by mgoblue
                          http://www.xkcd.com

                          You'd probably also like XKCD...similar style, deep joke with limited art
                          I thought the same thing when I saw the description of the comic...no offense, Linty, but you might need to spice things up a bit. The stick-man webcomics are quite common.
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                          • Scottdau
                            Banned
                            • Feb 2003
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                            #14
                            Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

                            Originally posted by mgoblue


                            Cyanide & Happiness @ Explosm.net

                            Coincidentally a similar stick figure comic site with a hangman theme...I like where you're going with this though, and stick figure humor just places more emphasis on the joke than the art, which can be cool.
                            It seems to me you need to make up another one. This is one is already taken. And that was funny. I like yours too Lintz.

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                            • Lintyfresh85
                              Where have I been?
                              • Jul 2002
                              • 17492

                              #15
                              Re: First ever 'comic' attempt

                              Originally posted by JohnnytheSkin
                              I thought the same thing when I saw the description of the comic...no offense, Linty, but you might need to spice things up a bit. The stick-man webcomics are quite common.
                              Unfortunately, I am only doing a stick-man comic because that's all I can draw successfully.
                              http://flotn.blogspot.com

                              Member of the Official OS Bills Backers Club

                              Originally posted by trobinson97
                              Hell, I shot my grandmother, cuz she was old.

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