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First ever 'comic' attempt
Hey guys, I just wanted to post my first ever comic strip today. I've been toying with the idea of drawing some very simple stick figure comics with 'witty' dialogue or ironic situations... Anyways, this is my first one, and I'd love some feedback, positive or negative.
http://flotn.blogspot.com
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Originally posted by trobinson97Hell, I shot my grandmother, cuz she was old.Tags: None -
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Is the noose supposed to represent a clothing hanger, and the person represents the "clothibng accessories" that hang from it? If so, that is sort of the pun type of stuff that many comics have and that is tite. If not, I don't want to be mean but can you explain the "joke" to me.Comment
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Is the noose supposed to represent a clothing hanger, and the person represents the "clothibng accessories" that hang from it? If so, that is sort of the pun type of stuff that many comics have and that is tite. If not, I don't want to be mean but can you explain the "joke" to me.Comment
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No. I'm just bad at drawing a noose.
I guess I was just saying everytime you play 'hangman' you are an accessory to the murder of a stickman.http://flotn.blogspot.com
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Originally posted by trobinson97Hell, I shot my grandmother, cuz she was old.Comment
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Great concept. Since you're wanting feedback, here's my two cents:
*keep the image true to the game hangman.... like less is more: no noose, feet, etc. needed. People will get it.
*maybe either less letters in the phrase or some other phrase like "goodbye cruel world"; "tell my wife I love her"...... something like that.Comment
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Maybe you can even spice it up by listing a category.NHL - Philadelphia Flyers
NFL - Buffalo Bills
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Cyanide & Happiness @ Explosm.net
Coincidentally a similar stick figure comic site with a hangman theme...I like where you're going with this though, and stick figure humor just places more emphasis on the joke than the art, which can be cool.Nintendo Switch Friend Code: SW-7009-7102-8818Comment
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Re: First ever 'comic' attempt
Great concept. Since you're wanting feedback, here's my two cents:
*keep the image true to the game hangman.... like less is more: no noose, feet, etc. needed. People will get it.
*maybe either less letters in the phrase or some other phrase like "goodbye cruel world"; "tell my wife I love her"...... something like that.
http://flotn.blogspot.com
Member of the Official OS Bills Backers Club
Originally posted by trobinson97Hell, I shot my grandmother, cuz she was old.Comment
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You'd probably also like XKCD...similar style, deep joke with limited artNintendo Switch Friend Code: SW-7009-7102-8818Comment
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Now that I see it, I don't think the "accessory...." fits because there isn't anyone else around and you'd have to stretch to think it was the person playing the game. So maybe more along the lines of something the guy hanging would say right before.Comment
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Cyanide & Happiness @ Explosm.net
Coincidentally a similar stick figure comic site with a hangman theme...I like where you're going with this though, and stick figure humor just places more emphasis on the joke than the art, which can be cool.Comment
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Unfortunately, I am only doing a stick-man comic because that's all I can draw successfully.http://flotn.blogspot.com
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Originally posted by trobinson97Hell, I shot my grandmother, cuz she was old.Comment
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