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canucksfan33 · 06-24-2009, 01:37 AM

Good job. I like this because you played for the Kamloops Blazers, which is my hometown. But, when you moved to Vancouver, you joined the Giants. You can't just join the Giants, the Blazers would have had to trade you, or you'd have to still play for the Blazers if they didn't.

But, either way, I like this. I'm following.

Edit: Hope you get drafted by the Nucks!

bashbros30 · 06-24-2009, 01:58 AM

Hey man. nice star. I shall be following.

canucksfan33 · 06-24-2009, 02:02 AM

The image your trying to get doesn't work, because I was going to use it to show you, and it didn't work.

Nevermind, I think you know how, just that image doesn't work.

shinderhizzle84 · 06-24-2009, 02:11 AM

hey man, you've got a real solid start going on here, but I'd suggest putting some spaces between each topic change, to make it a bit easier on the eyes.

Also, the writing needs to flow more. Instead of saying "Hi, my name is Billy Joel, and I like cows," say, "Billy Joel had always been fond of farm animals, and especially liked cows."

If you're struggling to see what I'm getting at, check out my BAP, or Bhurst's, or even Quickster's.

Good luck, though.

bluejacketsfan · 06-24-2009, 03:49 AM

nice updates ill definatly be following.

derrickthomas58 · 06-24-2009, 05:33 AM

Good start, keep it up!!

Bolts_26 · 06-24-2009, 02:57 PM

Nice. I like this a lot.

Except I'm pretty sure first year BAP's only get a 1 year deal..

No big deal, Great job with this.

06-24-2009, 01:27 AM	#1
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06-24-2009, 01:37 AM	#2
canucksfan33 Banned OVR: 13 Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Kamloops, BC	Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP Good job. I like this because you played for the Kamloops Blazers, which is my hometown. But, when you moved to Vancouver, you joined the Giants. You can't just join the Giants, the Blazers would have had to trade you, or you'd have to still play for the Blazers if they didn't. But, either way, I like this. I'm following. Edit: Hope you get drafted by the Nucks! Last edited by canucksfan33; 06-24-2009 at 01:49 AM.

06-24-2009, 01:58 AM	#3
bashbros30 Pro OVR: 12 Join Date: Mar 2009	Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP Hey man. nice star. I shall be following. __________________ When life gets me down, I get over it!

06-24-2009, 02:02 AM	#4
canucksfan33 Banned OVR: 13 Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Kamloops, BC	Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP The image your trying to get doesn't work, because I was going to use it to show you, and it didn't work. Nevermind, I think you know how, just that image doesn't work. Last edited by canucksfan33; 06-24-2009 at 02:06 AM.

06-24-2009, 02:11 AM	#5
shinderhizzle84 Banned OVR: 31 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Westchester County, NY	Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP hey man, you've got a real solid start going on here, but I'd suggest putting some spaces between each topic change, to make it a bit easier on the eyes. Also, the writing needs to flow more. Instead of saying "Hi, my name is Billy Joel, and I like cows," say, "Billy Joel had always been fond of farm animals, and especially liked cows." If you're struggling to see what I'm getting at, check out my BAP, or Bhurst's, or even Quickster's. Good luck, though.

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06-24-2009, 03:49 AM	#6
bluejacketsfan Banned OVR: 16 Join Date: Dec 2008	Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP nice updates ill definatly be following.

06-24-2009, 05:33 AM	#7
derrickthomas58 MVP OVR: 22 Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Newfoundland	Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP Good start, keep it up!!

06-24-2009, 02:57 PM	#8
Bolts_26 MVP OVR: 37 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Tampa	Re: The Career of Joshua Ormand NHL 09 BAP Nice. I like this a lot. Except I'm pretty sure first year BAP's only get a 1 year deal.. No big deal, Great job with this.

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