The Sniper Shannon(A BAP)

[star king3]

well ive got 2/3 of the money to buy 09 so heres my BAP of Jeff Shannon im running this with Nick and Jason sort of so im using some of jasons storys for help so here we go.

[star king3]

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It was 6:30 when i woke up i felt a big pit in my stomach it was draft day my older brother Ryan walked in " Hey buddy how ya feelin?" "Im nervous but noing that Jason and Nick will be their makes me feel better." " Ya its good having friends their are you planning on makking new friends?" "Um i think ill get to talking with Drew Doughty and ill see if i can talk to Ovechkin Nauslund Alfredson Heatley Lidstrom Datsyuk Zetterberg Toews and Kane because those five teams are intrested in me though Kopitar or Cammaleri might be nice to talk to to see if the kings might be secretly intrested." " Wow lofty expectations. Hey the Nucks have the 5th and 6th and the Kings have 3rd and 4th picks so you have a shot there and the hawks have 8th and Ottawa has 7th so good luck hope you make the nucks with me." "Me to it would be nice but i better get goin if i wanna meet some other prospects."

[SabresKings3623]

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decent start dude, keep it up

[star king3]

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I walk into the arena " Hey Nick." "Hey Jeff sup." "Not much you" i heard that if you arent chosen by the 5th round pick your a Canuck." "Sweet me a Canuck." "Ya." "I Should probably go talk around cya." "Bye." "Wait." "Drew Doughty?" "The one and only Jeff" "Hey." "Hey guys its me Anze." "Hey" "I have inside news on the kings picks." "What." "Well with our first pick it looks like you Drew and second looks like you Nick but we have shown secret intrest in you Jeff so good luck and see you on the podium at least one of you."

[Gauntsghost]

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If I may make a suggestion, starting a new paragraph after every change in speech makes it easy to read.

[star king3]

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If I may make a suggestion, starting a new paragraph after every change in speech makes it easy to read.

ya i agree i will next time. great to see you on OS gaunts

[star king3]

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as i walked to talk to Markus Nauslund Jason cut me of.
"Hey Jeff whats goin on."
"The usual except this time i can actually stop talking how about you?"
"Nervous i had a scary dream this morning at about five."
"What was it about?"
"Stanley cup finals game 7 2-2 late 3rd i have this breakaway right."
"Sure."
"I start skating towards Osgood then my feet start turning towards Fluery."
"what did Crosby look like then."
"He and Malkin had horrid written all over their faces as i score on fleury and get booed."
"Haha that wont happen."
"Ya where are you heding?"
"To talk to Nauslund 'bout their two picks how about you?"
"Nuttin."
"Ahh im gonna talk to Naussy then it should be Draft time."

[star king3]

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"Um Mr.Nauslund can i have a word?"
"Sure"
"Hi im Ryan Shannon's little brother Jeff."
"Ahh hi what is it you wanted to says?"
"I Heard from Nick that if im not picked by the 5th pick in round 1 im a canuck can you clear this up"
"Well im not aloud to give you a guarenteed yes but we are largly thinking about picking you and Hodgson."
"Wow i always dreamed of being on my home town team and i hope i make it to Danny and Hanks lines."
"Jeff you better go its almost draft time."
"Thank you Mr.Nauslund."
"Its Markus and posibly Captain Cya."
"Bye"

[Gauntsghost]

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BUT LIEK NASLUND IZNT A NUCK NO MOREZ LOLOLOLOL!!1

[SabresKings3623]

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LOL

[star king3]

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its before the ufa stuff

[Gauntsghost]

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Psh. You'd better include that part of it.

[star king3]

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ya of course

[star king3]

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It was draft time i sat next to Nick and three rows behind Jason i heard a hush start to fall and it was draft time. i was curious to see who the first overall pick of the devils would be it could be Shertok the Jerktok Steven Stamkos or even Me Jason or Nick. I had a funny feeling that i would be the last of us three to be drafted but Skyland wants to be a penguin and i would retire if i was drafted by them. I guess its all up to where i would fit in. But as the Devils staff took the stage i sat and waited.
"The New Jersey Devils are proud to pick with the First overall pick Ivan Shertok from the Soviet Red Army."

[SabresKings3623]

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It was draft time i sat next to Nick and three rows behind Jason i heard a hush start to fall and it was draft time. i was curious to see who the first overall pick of the devils would be it could be Shertok the Jerktok Steven Stamkos or even Me Jason or Nick. I had a funny feeling that i would be the last of us three to be drafted but Skyland wants to be a penguin and i would retire if i was drafted by them. I guess its all up to where i would fit in. But as the Devils staff took the stage i sat and waited.
"The New Jersey Devils are proud to pick with the First overall pick Ivan Shertok from the Soviet Red Army."

LMFAO