BAP: Eric McKee

[Bolts_26]

Agreed.
Hope to see you get this going again Eric.

[star king3]

Quote: Originally Posted by Bolts_26

Agreed. Hope to see you get this going again Eric.

to bad.. but yeah.

[emckee04]

I'm really really sorry guys my internet has been down for quite some time I really apoligize, another post will be up tohnight.... and thanks so much for the tips.

[emckee04]

"Wow" I said to myself in amazment.
The prudential Center was huge.

Only a few hours till traning camp started and my heart was pounding.

But before I could go meet the team i was told to go speak with Mr. Lamourellie.

"Hey kid, have a seat"
"Hows it going Lou"
"Good, listen I have some great news"
"Okay?"
"We have traded you to the Chicago Blackhawks"
"YOU WHAT!?"
"Take it easy kid, allright were sorry you had to drive out this far its only that we just found out 3 hours ago. We figured we mine aswell just tell you in person"

I was going beserk, but I knew I had to keep my cool. I took a deep breath and sat back down

"Were going to give you a plane ticket and youll be on your way to Chicago for there tranning camp. And I gotta say kid, this could be a big oppurtonite for you. I think they might let you play in Chicago"
"Okay, but what about my apartment? My car?"
"Were sending someone to drive your car over to Chicago. and well send over a moving truck with all your furniture as soon as you give us your location."
"Allright thanks Lou, I'll see ya soon"
"Im sure you will kid, Best of luck".

[shinderhizzle84]

MUCH MUCH better, i really liked it, lol.

and very interesting plot twist, right there.

[emckee04]

trying to figure out how to add vids :l

[Bolts_26]

Great Job, love to see this back up!

[shinderhizzle84]

Quote: Originally Posted by emckee04

trying to figure out how to add vids :l

don't worry about vids, as long as the writing is pretty good (which it is) you'll be fine.